Your Hosts: DongWon Song, Mary Robinette Kowal, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler
Novels deliver a lot of information, and it’s helpful to consider that delivery in terms of layers. Novels are layer cakes, and we’re not talking about a three-layer birthday cake. We’re talking about a dobosh torte, or a mille crepe cake. And if we’ve made you hungry for stratified pastry, that’s okay, because we made ourselves hungry, too.
Credits: This episode was recorded by Marshall Carr, Jr., and mastered by Alex Jackson
Remove your entire 1st scene from your draft. Rewrite it from scratch, using the tools we’ve covered in the last eight episodes. Once you’ve done that, revise it by highlighting the elements readers really need to know, and then put all of those ideas into a single paragraph.
Legend, by Marie Lu