Let’s get that first page written in a way that will bring the reader to all the rest of the pages.
Fifteen minutes long, because you're in a hurry, and we're not that smart.
Recorded live at Dragons & Fairy Tales in Eagle Mountain, Utah, this episode features the work of several brave souls who submitted their first paragraphs to us for critique. We are not American Idol — we’re not out to rip these to shreds. We offer constructive criticism, highlight the good…